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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012 | Talisman | Created on: originalshorts.com | 634 Views, 2 Nods.

Step Through The Mirror (for MS's time competition)



Step Through The Mirror


Step through the mirror, what will we see?

Step through the mirror, just you and me

My left is right, my right is left

Split down the middle, by the mirror's cleft

Now I am in, but I want out

No-one seems to hear me shout

The crack is closing more and more

The crack that was my only door

Now it has sealed, I'm here forever

I have to pull myself together

But, everything's all back to front

Why did I have to pull that stunt?

Stepping through the mirror, to see what I could see

Has cost me all eternity...

                


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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012
This is really thought provoking ! There was a Roger Moore film years ago on a similar path
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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012
I think you should seek help H.
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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012
Good one Talisman.
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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012
inner sanctum - fnarrrrr snigger
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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012
When I was a kid there used to be a series on tele called Inner Sanctum, which was a series of shorts, only about 10 minutes long each episode, of scary stories. I've never forgotten the one where a woman is convinced she can go through the mirror on the front of her wardrobe into another world. She was eventually found hanging in the wardrobe and it scared the bejayzuss out of me.
I also used to spend a lot of time in front of our big mirror wondering what it would be like to be Hank Marvin or George Harrison, but that was another fantasy.
Good post Talisman
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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012
this is very clever. now in your in the competiton.
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Wed, 22nd Feb 2012
This was one of my first,and favourite poems.
As a child, I spent a lot of time in front of the big mirror in my parents room, wondering what it would be like to step through into the opposite world of the mirror. Whether it would be scary or not.
I've seen many strange things happen in mirrors, but I think that was more down to my state of mind at the time, rather than anything supernatural.
I've always been quite weird.
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