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Tue, 17th Jul 2012 | MatthewCollins | 1,276 Views, 2 Nods.

Summer Rain (Comp)

Here I stand on a patch of land
Looking about me and feeling grand
I want to shout to the world that you're mine
Oh woman you really are divine

Our love is like the summer rain
Feeding everything on the air and plain
Like a seed growing in soil and water
Its fruits become out daughter

With eyes so bright and passion so wild
You truly are natures child
Your voice is like a whisper on the wind
And your spirit is something the gods can't rescind

I feel the summer rain washing all over me
And with you I'll always be free
Many times I feel it's freshness cleaning all around
And its beauty is all abound




                


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Fri, 10th Aug 2012
This is beautiful
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Sun, 05th Aug 2012
Lovely
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Mon, 23rd Jul 2012
That's ok, it wasn't really a comp, just an effort to cheer up this dreary summer.

Well it seems that your contribution has done the trick, cos the weather is lovely now :)

A very nice poem it is too.
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Sun, 22nd Jul 2012
I hadn't realised that time had moved on so quickly and I'd completely missed the cut off date. Oh what a fool I am haha
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Wed, 18th Jul 2012
I thought it very romantic. Amazing, I still have a heart there somewhere.
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Wed, 18th Jul 2012
What was your original comment?
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Tue, 17th Jul 2012
Who has taken my comment away?
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Tue, 17th Jul 2012
This is in response to Bluehound's competition
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